After presenting our pitch, we were given some written feedback based on our questions we asked our class.
Our questions were:
Does our idea appeal to our audience?
Is the storyline suitable for our style of music?
Do you think our locations are suited to our genre?
Is our idea achievable?
Are there any other ideas that might fit with our video?
The feedback we got from our pitch overall was very positive. Our feedback suggested that the narrative captured the mood of the song which was set to create be a sad depressing atmosphere. The audience also commented on the right type of locations and props we decided on for our video, which they thought was appealing and connotes the genre of the song. Also our feedback stated we had shown inspiration off other artists, they liked the similar style of storyline from other music videos we looked at.
We had some other criticism that explained they were unsure of the specific target audience. Which suggests that we didn’t show enough evidence or research to what our audience was. I believe more evidence and research is needed to show a clear understanding of our target audience. Also we didn’t look into a great deal of mise-en-scene, which was one of our criticisms for our pitch. We believe more information on certain costumes, props and actors available would be useful to include in our pitch.
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